What do you think of my intro on my essay on the odyssey?

use proper name in 3rd sentence... condense 4th and 5th sentences, re-word it, simplify... stick to the same order given in the first sentence. use a separate sentence to describe each way he IS like a modern hero, and then separate sentences to describe the ways he is not. Decent premise tho... you need to read it out loud if you can't find a fellow student to help edit.